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Just saw that the Merge didn't work as well as I waited, but I'm too tired and sick to repair that now. xD The main problem with that are those blank spots, that should be connected, reducing the volume, like the back of Sonja's head. --' Damn A3
The second test page I've done as a training. Sorry for the bad draw, I'm trying to improve it, but the college don't leave me with enough time...
Anyway, thanks for looking at it!
REDONE SOME THINGS ^^
The second test page I've done as a training. Sorry for the bad draw, I'm trying to improve it, but the college don't leave me with enough time...
Anyway, thanks for looking at it!
REDONE SOME THINGS ^^
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As you ask me, I'm here to give you my opinion. ^_^
Your page is pretty good, but there are things that need improvement: (sorry for my english, I hope you understand what i say ^^)
REFERENCES: When you work on a comic page you Must have photo references (for places, trees, houses, also for the drapery of the mantle). The references allows you to make everything more realistic.
There are a lot of beautiful photo in the web.^_^
SHOT: movement shots are very important, you can use them to tell a story without text explanation.
ANATOMY: you must to know how a body can be moved.
Now, in the detail:
1st panel: Ok! Is the 1st appearance of the Hero, is good,
2:the fight of Thor and the troll can be larger (and you don't need of too much speed lines, your shot is strong enough). Important: you must always drawing the background.
3: (here you need references!) this frame is not easy to read. Were's the troll? (you can show him in the background, but you need him for give some continuity from frame 2 to frame 3)
4:good. ^_^
Well, you're a good artist, you need some pratice, but you can do great panels. ^_^
Your page is pretty good, but there are things that need improvement: (sorry for my english, I hope you understand what i say ^^)
REFERENCES: When you work on a comic page you Must have photo references (for places, trees, houses, also for the drapery of the mantle). The references allows you to make everything more realistic.
There are a lot of beautiful photo in the web.^_^
SHOT: movement shots are very important, you can use them to tell a story without text explanation.
ANATOMY: you must to know how a body can be moved.
Now, in the detail:
1st panel: Ok! Is the 1st appearance of the Hero, is good,
2:the fight of Thor and the troll can be larger (and you don't need of too much speed lines, your shot is strong enough). Important: you must always drawing the background.
3: (here you need references!) this frame is not easy to read. Were's the troll? (you can show him in the background, but you need him for give some continuity from frame 2 to frame 3)
4:good. ^_^
Well, you're a good artist, you need some pratice, but you can do great panels. ^_^